November 2nd, 2013, 11:52 am

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LunaMagi, November 2nd, 2013, 11:52 am     Reply

And finally a comic on time~ yessssssssss.

So anyways. A bit of reading here, sorry 'bout that if you don't like reading. But you know, you gotta know what's going on to understand what comes next and stuff~ Also trying out a new style. I really like it so I'm probably gonna keep it. Cause to me it looks slightly realistic. I dunno... leave me alone -curls up into a ball-

So ya, enjoy the page. I hope to be on time next Saturday.

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Almightyra, November 4th, 2013, 1:59 am     Reply

never assume, you'll make an ass out of u and me

arswiss, November 5th, 2013, 7:38 pm     Reply

The story is promising. A few suggestions! If you think there's too much dialogue, one way to make it less of an intimidating read is to scale down the size. Just make the speech bubbles smaller! (It also allows more room for artwork!)
And I think you would really benefit from adding value to the pages. In other words, add more blacks and whites and grayscales! It might take a bit more time but it will make the pages a lot stronger and will catch the eye a lot more.
Good luck!!

LunaMagi, November 5th, 2013, 8:22 pm     Reply

@arswiss: Thanks. I will try that. But I might not be able to update every saturday anymore (not like I did anyways but stilll)

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